what can I say this is amazing and scary to. love the way at the end and the beginning where it starts out at school and then ends at a abandon school(I think) ,and I love the characters in the story its very amazing and love the way you have written this gave me a chill up my spine also i like how Zach was not afraid to go into the haunted school and the the lockers that were slamming and those beasts were cool to.So what can i say this is a awesome story agree or not? nice job